[Drabble] Dangerous Instinct...

[sterling]

Title: Dangerous Instinct
Original Fiction
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
A/N: The desire to drink blood...
Prompt: Drink (for fiction_drabbles)

A steady shudder surged through his body as she pressed herself up against him. He struggled to stop his fangs from pushing through to the surface, a constant reminder that he was never in complete control of his dangerous instinct. Crushing his mouth closed, his eyes watered, as sharp teeth scraped against his bottom lip, drawing two thin ribbons of blood that rippled jaggedly down his chin: crimson, welling, and defiant.

“You’ll protect me, won’t you?”

He grunted, gasping for air, unable to respond to her. His heart said yes, but the rest of him undeniably said no.

Comments

[rebelliouswhitequeen]

This is such a tasty drabble. X333

That last sentence is simply just yummy. XD

[sterling]

Thanks. :X This scene is terrible UST involving blood lust... some of my more human vampires struggle with what they are, but in the end can't deny reality.

Glad you liked it. ^_^*

[rebelliouswhitequeen]

Ahh- reality-- it's like the truth-- it huuuuuurts lol. XD

[wufei_w]

Oooo, that was a great scene. ^_^

[sterling]

Thank you very much. ^_^*

[meoryn]

You've really captured the temptation he finds himself in here, trying to fight against his own nature and instinct for blood. I wonder just how long he can protect her for?

[sterling]

Thank you. ^_^

I suspect not long... the question is: will he just leave her, or destroy her? Guess it depends on the true nature of his character.

[tinmouse]

Oh, wow. This is terribly sensual! If I didn't know any better but I do, so you needn't worry I'd say this was a metaphor. Hehe. ;D

[sterling]

Thank you for reading and commenting! ^_^ (If it gets any longer, it might turn into an allegory, if I'm not careful! XD)